This week for reading we researched about the blood moon and total lunar eclipse. I found out some really cool facts, so I put them on this presentation to show you. Did you see the blood moon? If you did see the blood moon or have any feedback please comment down below.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Wilkinson. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, May 27, 2021
Monday, May 24, 2021
World War 1
Thursday, May 20, 2021
Did You Feel Emotion?
Hello, Bonjour, This week at school for writing we have been writing a fictional story to make our reader feel emotion. The reason we have done a story like this is because our learning intention is to deepen our understanding of descriptive language by creating feelings for our reader, such as empathy. We also looked into short sentences. After you have read my story please comment down below. Did you like my story? Did I use good descriptive language?
My legs shake. My hands shake. I see the dark, cold, room. I gloomily walk in and see my dog helplessly lying there. On a cold metal surgical table. I feel a lump in my throat as if there is a metal ball rolling around. I smell the dusty musty air. I start saying goodbye to Boris. I say sorry for all the mean things I have said. I see the pain in Boris's eyes. I pat him. I think back to the first day we met. The feeling of my sole shrinking and turning hollow gets worse. I begin losing hope. The pain starts to grow. Memories start to come back. I wish that we could play fetch, just one more time. While I whisper “don't die, Please don't die” He starts to close his eyes. My tears start to bubble up in my eyes. I can’t take it any more, I have to let it out, so I do. I wonder, when Boris goes to heaven will he see his dead mum again?I then look over. The nurse comes in with a needle and says “it's time,” She starts to inject him, but he jumps up and starts dancing and singing. How did he do that? I wonder. “Are you sure he is sick?” The nurse said. “I think he is OK, it’s a miracle” Next thing I know Boris is flat on the floor as dead as a rock.
Monday, May 10, 2021
Skydiving
At school for writing we did a warm up activity. For the warm up activity we had to describe the feeling of skydiving without using the words skydiving or skydive. If you have any feedback please comment below.
Thursday, May 6, 2021
Timeline of the Civil Rights Movement