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Monday, May 10, 2021

Skydiving

 

At school for writing we did a warm up activity. For the warm up activity we had to describe the feeling of skydiving without using the words skydiving or skydive. If you have any feedback please comment below. 

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  1. AnonymousMay 11, 2021 at 2:28 PM

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  2. AnonymousMay 11, 2021 at 2:35 PM

    Kia Ora this is a pretty good piece of writing.But I think you forgot the full stop at the end.
    Huey from Ahipara School.
    Have A Good Day.

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  3. DadMay 14, 2021 at 2:16 PM

    Great describing of the activity of skydiving. I'm sure you'll be keen to give it a go when you're older.

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  4. AnonymousJune 16, 2021 at 2:29 PM

    Hi this is Kyvana from Ahipara School and I LOVE this piece of writing, maybe at the end add a fullstop. :)

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